Hey Jamaine, Well done really thinking about how the author's life impacts his choices of writing. Don't forget to use all the normal writing rules in your paragraph. Like punctuation and not using more than one conjunction per sentence. (Use the conjunction chart to help you if you need to.
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Hey Jamaine,
ReplyDeleteWell done really thinking about how the author's life impacts his choices of writing. Don't forget to use all the normal writing rules in your paragraph. Like punctuation and not using more than one conjunction per sentence. (Use the conjunction chart to help you if you need to.
Can you go back and revise it please.
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