Monday, 26 November 2018

SLJ paying it forward

if i ever went back in time In the 1930's i would give a special family 15 bars of kit kat and i would also give a family mallow puffs because those were the chocolates in the 1930's and i would give the baby's that could not eat hard stuff gummy's like this and i would also give the parents mackintosh.I would love to give sour lollies to the teenagers.The most important one i have to give to all of them is cad bury chocolate.I would love to get them the cutest dog in the world.i would also give them family close.

4 comments:

  1. hey jamaine i really like the lost of feed back in your writing what you have put in your writing. its so awesome jamaine keep up the great work jamaine nice

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  2. Hi jamaine its billie i really like the way you did it but next time can you spell

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  3. Kia Ora Jamaine
    It's me tangi
    I really liked how you will give the 1930s some chocolate like kit kats and other chocolate.I really liked how you said that you will give them a dog so they can stay entertained.I was wondering if you would give them a washing machine so they can wash there clothes more faster.

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  4. Hi jamaine
    I really like what you would do for them thats really kind.I really liked when you said i'd give them kit kats,Mallow puffs,Mackintosh and cadbury chocolate and gummy's for the kids.But what about a washing ,machine and a dryer ain't that a choice so they could wash and dry there clothes

    Kind Regards,Jahnera

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