Friday, 15 March 2019

Adding Information


1 comment:

  1. Very well done Jamaine,
    I can see that you have used a conjunction after the comma and it makes sense. You are well on your way to more detailed and interesting writing.

    Next time, don't forget you make the letter after a comma just a little one, because it's still the same sentence.

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