Very well done Jamaine, I can see that you have used a conjunction after the comma and it makes sense. You are well on your way to more detailed and interesting writing.
Next time, don't forget you make the letter after a comma just a little one, because it's still the same sentence.
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Very well done Jamaine,
ReplyDeleteI can see that you have used a conjunction after the comma and it makes sense. You are well on your way to more detailed and interesting writing.
Next time, don't forget you make the letter after a comma just a little one, because it's still the same sentence.