Friday 13 April 2018

Leaf poem

WALT- Use adjectives, verbs, similes and rhyming words

One time I saw all of it falling down.  Then I saw them falling everywhere and I saw it dashing on people.

Then I felt the stuff falling all the way down and started moving around from the rusty wind that was blowing all around.

Then I was moving around and they was going everywhere even on people’s eyes. Then when we saw it they were just started flying everywhere even all the way down the field they are always everywhere.

In the storm there was leaves everywhere and they was falling down from the rust old wind and the wind was very powerful and was strong.Then suddenly the trees were falling down by the powerful wind then everyone just heard a bang!!! Then everyone just got the biggest loudest bang of their life. Again it just hit the car and they met their death in the sky.

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